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outlin for persuasive essay

INTRO      Should kids be restricted from playing video games? I believe that kids should be allowed to play video games for the following reasons; they relief stress, they are very fun, and they are educational. BODY ☺§ Reliefs stress -students come home after school stressed out -playing video games allow them to forget about their worries and relax -When all stress is relieved, his/her mood is back to normal and will do better in his/her work ☺§ Very fun -ex: Minecraft -You can play with other people from around the world in your games -You can go kill monsters and other players ☺§ Educational -Sometimes includes lots of thinking -Makes your mind sharper -Can make your reflexes faster CONCLUSION      In summary video games are very benifitial. Video games can relief our stress,  very fun, and educational That is why I believe that kids should not be restrained from playing video games

Rewrite Of: If Aliens Were Real

      One day as I was watching television, something random popped up in an advertisement. "BEEP, BEEP! We are Alien from the planet X,??? Prepare for battle! Introducing the new alien toy...." Imagine if aliens actually attacked us one day. This happened in year 2999 . Many unidentified flying objects (U.F.Os) had been witnessed flying in the sky. Day after day, more U.F.O.s were spotted. The U.F.O.s killed people, destroyed buildings, etc. It turned out to be an alien invasion. The aliens had superior technology shown by the weapons they used. In response, all of the world's armies combined together to face the aliens. There was a major battle fought on earth's surface. Aliens sent many strong aerial vehicles all over Earth's surface to destroy all of the armies. (including the navy ships) Aliens took over all of the surface. Aliens eventually killed all the humans on the land. Only survivors of the war was the world's submarine navy. The navy

If Aliens Were Real

      Imagine if there were aliens in the universe! I wonder what were to happen if they were to attack us. This happened in year 2019. Many undefined flying objects (U.F.Os) had been witnessed flying in the sky. Day after day, more U.F.O.s were spotted. The U.F.O.s started to kill people, destroy buildings, etc. It turned out to be an alien invasion. It appeared the aliens had superior technology because of the weapons they used. In response, all of the world's army combined together to face the aliens. There was a major battle fought on earth's surface. The aliens sent many strong aerial vehicles. These aerial vehicles went all over Earth's surface to destroy all of the armies. (including the navy ships) The aliens took over all of the surface. The aliens eventually killed all the humans on the land. The only survivors of the war was the world's submarine navy. The navy submarines were able to hide under the water untouched. The navy lived in their submarines. They a

All About Me

     Everyone is special in their own way. I believe I am unique for many reasons; I am a professional in math, I have very creative ideas, and I am a very hands on and quick improvisor in computer games.      First of all, I am very good in math. Last year, I got a 99.5% in math. This helped me skip pre-algebra and I got into algebra one. I can also make complex calculations in seconds in my head. I know all my formulas, and math vocabulary. I even know more that an eighth grader in our class. I got many A's in test and quizzes, where others could not. This is why I feel proud about being a professional in math.      Second of all, I have many creative ideas. For example there was this program called Odyssey of the mind. In Odyssey of the mind my team and I had to create a skit. I had many creative ideas. Most of the people in my team agreed with me and we implemented. So I took top role in my team. When we performed in front of the judge, we had the best skit ever. In fact it