outlin for persuasive essay

INTRO
     Should kids be restricted from playing video games? I believe that kids should be allowed to play video games for the following reasons; they relief stress, they are very fun, and they are educational.

BODY

☺§ Reliefs stress
-students come home after school stressed out
-playing video games allow them to forget about their worries and relax
-When all stress is relieved, his/her mood is back to normal and will do better in his/her work

☺§ Very fun
-ex: Minecraft
-You can play with other people from around the world in your games
-You can go kill monsters and other players

☺§ Educational
-Sometimes includes lots of thinking
-Makes your mind sharper
-Can make your reflexes faster

CONCLUSION

     In summary video games are very benifitial. Video games can relief our stress,  very fun, and educational That is why I believe that kids should not be restrained from playing video games

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