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OUTLINE Intro      The argument is that should we add two extra weeks to school? There is an argument in favor and there is an argument against. I believe that the cost of adding two weeks outweigh the benefit of education on the students. Body       First of all, many of the students and teachers are not getting enough time off. Whenever they get to school they are always stressful and tired. The teachers and students need a break. The students and teachers hardly get to spend time with their parents and friend. Adding two more weeks to school are just going to make things worse. There is only so much students can learn in a year. If the students have already learned everything, then what was the point of adding those two weeks?      Secondly, this idea will cost the district a lot more money. They will have to pay the teacher, Janitor, principle, etc. They will also have to pay for electricity and water. All of this...

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OUTLINE Intro              -Imagine two weeks more of school, cutting into your summer vacation! I believe that students should not have to go to school two weeks earlier for 2 reasons: students and teachers need a time off, and it will cost the district more money. Body       Need time off              -Teachers and students need a break              -They need for family time      Cost               -Will have to pay the teacher, Janitor, principle, etc              -Will have to pay for electricity and water       Others may say it improves education              - I agree              -But I believe that that the cost for the district and the stress on ...
Introduction      Ramesses II was a great  pharaoh  who ruled  Egypt  from 1279  BC -1213  BC for 66 years which was one of the longest reigns . The first thing that comes to your mind about pharaohs of Egypt is Ramesses II. Ramesses II had built many monuments to prove all his significance.  Ramesses II led many successful campaigns to expand his empire into neighboring lands. So the  neighboring  countries had conflicts with Ramesses II.   He  was  born in 1300  BC as  scion of the 1 9th dynasty and died at 1213 BC.   He lived to be 96 years old. Overall h is  citizens, priests, military were happy under his rule.  Family life       Ramesses II was born in one of the greatest families in the world.  His  mother was queen Tuya, and his  father was Seti I. Seti I Had won many battles against he Hittites empire in many successfu...
Introduction              -Dynasty, time of reign                   -19th dynasty                   -ruled from 1279  BC -1213  BC               -Profile:                   - born in 1300  BC                   -died at 1213 BC                   -lived to be 99 years old        -Ruled:                    -citizens, priests, military felt happy to be ruled my Ramesses II.                    -Ramesses II went on many campaigns to the neighboring lands.                    - Neighboring ...
Introduction        -Profile:                   - birth, death, age       -Dynasty, time of reign                   -which dynasty         -Ruled:                    -How the subjects (citizens) felt                    -How the neighboring countries felt                    -How the military felt                    -How the priests felt Family life          -Family                    -relation with wives                    -relation with mother                 ...
Preparations                Excited:                         - First time on our own for a week out in the woods It was the day I've been waiting for. It was January 21, 2012, Monday. I was going to Walden West! I got ready as quick as a snap.                Fearful:                         - Miss parents                         - Miss house                         how will you take care of your self for so long         ...

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OUTLINE   Preparations               Excited:                         - First time on our own for a week out in the woods             Fearful:                         - Miss parents                         - Miss house Journey Excited:             - Meet friend - Talk about where we are going             Fearful:                         -...